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Mischief – Chapter 6

Please remember that I will need to remove this before I publish, which I hope will be before next weekend.

10 Comments

  1. J. W. Garrett

    Oh-My-Goodness… heavy sigh. What more can I say? I loved this. You have really captured D&E in this scene. How lovely. Thanks you for sharing. I can hardly wait to see this launched. Congratulations on a most excellent story.

    • J "Joy" Dawn King

      I just read your comment to Nicole. We agree that you are wonderful squared.

  2. jan cobb

    What a horrible scare! But it appears that Darcy has fallen in love with someone other than Elizabeth or Georgie or even Pemberley. That little rascal would be named Tommy. Adorable!

    • J "Joy" Dawn King

      Thank you for reading and commenting, Jan. Yes, that little fellow has wiggled and squirmed his way right into Darcy’s heart. What do you think? Might he decide he wants a little one for himself? We have three chapters and an epilogue yet to come.

  3. Glynis

    Oh heavens! My heart melted too! I’m not sure why but I have a definite feeling that Darcy would love to have a baby and would love Elizabeth as the mother? Let’s just hope his dreams come true! I can’t wait to own this one 🙂

  4. Sarah P

    Definitely a happy sigh of relief that the mischievous escaping Bennet has been found safe and well. If Mrs Bennet ever was granted an excuse for her flutterings nerves, the disappearance and rediscovery of her son would be it.

  5. Shelley Hoisington

    That was a wonderful, emotional chapter! Children open our hearts to love ❤️ Thanks for the quick update.

  6. Kathy Berlin

    This is wonderful. I love seeing Darcy so affected by Tommy and Elizabeth!

  7. sheilalmajczan

    This chapter ended so much more with a contented feeling that all will be well compared to the cliffhanger last chapter. Yes, as others here say, Tommy has them all wrapped around his fingers, “Da”. Love how he picked Darcy out to be a special connection. And now Elizabeth sees more proof of how caring Darcy is…even if “responsible” is up in the air. I would blame Mr. Bennet before Darcy but at least Darcy tries to take on some of the blame, if not all. The boy needs a bell around his neck…as the mouse said about the cat! Thanks for this chapter.

  8. sheilalmajczan

    It says that was posted at 2:46 am yet my computer says 10:46 pm. What time zone is this column written in? Oregon is not ahead of this time zone. That time is more like in England…6 hours ahead of EST???

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