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Mischief – Chapter 9

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8 Comments

  1. Ruth Telford

    The story is very good thus far, I am enjoying it immensely. I found an error – « We have a lake at Pemberley where Georgiana and me ( should be I in this sentence) enjoy ice skating with hot cider and fried bread after. »
    You can’t say me enjoy skating, but you can say I enjoy skating therefore it is Georgiana and I .

    • J "Joy" Dawn King

      Thank you, Ruth. This is a ROUGH draft so I can guarantee that the mistakes are many. I will make sure this is corrected before I send it to my editor. I’m grateful you pointed it out.

  2. sheilalmajczan

    Compromise…I’m laughing…not really but that is funny. Smiling from ear to ear here. Darcy is moving forward nicely and contemplating having a family. Lovely. Thank you for this chapter.

  3. J. W. Garrett

    OMG!!! You sneaky think. That was amazing.

    • J. W. Garrett

      THING!! Grrr autocorrect. I imagine Mrs. Bennet saw that too. LOL!!

  4. pedmisson

    Tommy is certainly an interesting child. How he helped Darcy with Lizzy.

  5. Shelley Hoisington

    I am grinning ear to ear while reading this!. ⛄️⛄️

  6. Glynis

    I see there’s more so I’ll just say what a wonderful chapter! Love Tommy and can just imagine a baby of Darcy and Elizabeth being as mischievous!

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